Six Ways To Die      
By
Michael Carollo

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


FADE IN

    

A pleasant moonlit night in August. A long stretch of beach. Stillness everywhere. Up and down the beach a few bonfires blazing with groups of young people from the university near by. Behind the sandy beaches are large rocks and trees.  

 

Wide span of two men walking in the sand enjoying the warm evening air.

        

EXT.  TWO MEN WALKING THE BEACH - NIGHT

                                          

GENE is an investment banker, mid thirties, average height, courageous.

 

     TONY is a jovial man, easy going, over six feet, mid thirties, timid.

 

They’re walking past a big bonfire on the beach with kids singing songs, laughing, having a good time. Sparks flying in the air. Guys chasing girls, laughing.

 

Tony and Gene are carrying tree branches about three feet long, using them as walking sticks, dragging them through the sand. As they pass the kids and the camp fire, Gene whacks Tony on the ass with his stick, starts laughing.

 

                     GENE

          Un-guard peasant.

 

Tony holding up his stick.

 

                     TONY

          Your life is mine, pig.

 

They start sword fighting.

                                 

                     GENE

          You could never beat me when

          we were kids, and you’ll never

          beat me now.

 

                     TONY

          I’ve improved since I was nine.

 

Kids sitting by the camp fire start watching and circling  them, rooting, yelling to see who will be the victor.

 

They keep fighting and laughing, fighting just like in the movies. Gene finally stabs Tony. He holds his chest, falls down pretending to die. Gene stands over him.

 


                     GENE

              (Sarcastic)

                        I told you to take fencing

              in college. You still stink.

 

Tony gets up laughing, all the kids by the campfire start applauding, Gene and Tony take a bow, turn, then continue walking the beach waving goodby to the kids.

    

EXT.  ANOTHER SECLUDED PART OF THE BEACH

 

Still walking by a group of large rocks lining the beach.

 

                          TONY

              (matter of fact)

              You know, we could build

              a pyramid with all these

          large rocks.

                       

As they’re walking, they hear muffled voices.

 

                     TONY

          Did you hear that?

 

                      GENE

          Where’d it come from?

 

Looking to his right.

 

                     TONY

                   (pointing)

          Over there!

 

Gene motioning Tony to follow.

 

                     GENE

          Shusss, come-on.  

                                                        

Near the rocks, they bend down, sneak to where the sounds  coming from.

 

They climb upon some tall rocks about eight feet high, peek over the top into the sandy part near the trees.

 

There’s a campfire blazing.

 

     GENE AND TONY’S POV:

 

They see two young men standing, watching two other men holding down a girls arms while a fifth person is having intercourse.

The girl is squirming, crying, trying to get away. She tries to scream, but one of the men has a hanky over her mouth.

 

The girl is tiny, blonde hair, slim with small firm breasts. Baby face, looks about 18. 

                                                              One of the men standing is holding a gun. They’re all laughing, having a good time. Tony whispers to Gene.

 

BACK ON GENE AND TONY

 

                     TONY

          Let’s get out of here.

 

                     GENE

              (whispering)

     No. Let’s help the girl.

 

                     TONY

              (scared)

          What, are you nuts?

 

Tony keeps looking left and right, making sure he’s not seen.

 

BACK ON GUYS

 

When the first guy finishes with the girl, one of the other guys takes his pants down, mounts the girl.

 

INSERT - GENE, AND TONY LYING ON ROCKS

 

                          GENE

              (whispering) 

          Come on, lets go beat the shit

          out of them.

 

                     TONY

              (whispering)

          Don’t you see the gun?

 

                     GENE

                        Yeah, so what should we do?

                                                           

                     TONY

          Lets go report this to the

          police.

 

BACK ON GUYS

SHAWN, tall, heavy set, straggly hair, mean, very dominant, wearing T-shirt and shorts. Looks at the two guys standing.

 

                     SHAWN

          Hey, go start digging a deep

          hole.

 

PAUL, tall, slim, timid. Cut-offs, T-shirt, sneakers.

 

Looks at Shawn.

 

              (confused)

          What do you want a hole for?

                                                                               SHAWN

     Don’t be stupid. What do you

          think we’re going to do with

          her? Just let her go so we can

          go to jail for rape?

 

BILL, tall, medium build, Shorts, no shirt. Glances at Shawn.

 

          Don’t get crazy man, we can’t

          kill her.

 

DAVE, average height, stocky, Shorts, no shirt. Holding his arms out-stretched, palms facing Shawn.

 

          I want nothing to do with

          killing.

 

JOHN, about six foot, medium build. Long shorts, torn T-shirt. Looks at Shawn.

 

                     JOHN

          Me neither!

 

                     SHAWN

              (hands on hips)

          Anyone have a better idea?

 

                     PAUL

              (trembling)

          Maybe the girl won’t say anything...

 

                     SHAWN

              (interrupts)

          You wanna bet 20 years on that?

                                                        

 

                     PAUL

                                           No... but there has to be a

          better way.

 

BACK ON GENE AND TONY

 

Hearing this, Gene stands up. Tony grabs at his shorts, tries to pull him down. Still whispering.

 

                     TONY

              (scared)

          What the hell are you doing?

          You wanna get shot?

 

                     GENE

          We have to do something, did

          you hear what that punk wants

          to do?

                                                    

                     TONY

          So, how can you stop that?

                                              

                     GENE

          Watch me.

 

Gene stands at the top of the rocks, facing the guys, cups his hands over his mouth, yells out loudly.

                                                                          GENE

          ‘Okay assholes, everybody put

          your hands up.’

 

BACK ON GUYS

 

They all get startled. Bill jumps off the girl pulls his pants up. The two guys holding the girls arms, release them, stand up, look toward the voice.

 

Shawn runs to Dave, who’s holding the gun. Dave is surprised as to what Shawn did.

 

Shawn grabs the gun, raises it and starts SHOOTING in the direction of the voice. The girl gets up, starts running away. Shawn turns, yells.

 

                     SHAWN

              (nonchalantly)

          Hey bitch, where do you think

          you’re going?

 

 

Raises the gun, points it in the girls direction, FIRES, hits her in the back. She falls down, blood splattering, bleeding  profusely.

 

BACK ON GENE AND TONY

 

Gene and Tony climb down the rocks, start running.  

 

                          GENE

          Run that way, (pointing)

          I’ll go this way.

 

                     TONY

              (frightened)

          Be careful.

 

They start running down the beach in different directions.

 

Shawn turns facing the guys.

 

BACK ON GUYS

 

                     SHAWN

          Okay you guys, pick up the

          girl, get her out of here.

          I’ll be right back.

 

                     PAUL

              (shaking)

          Boy, we’re in trouble now.

 

John facing Paul.

                                                        

                     JOHN

          Shut up, grab an arm.

                                                   

The four guys grab the girls arms and legs, carry her away, running to the trees.

 

They run into another secluded spot.

 

Shawn runs up to the rocks, climbs to the top to see the guy watching. He sees only one guy running in the distance.

                                                                               SHAWN

              (mumbling to himself)

          Shit, I’ll never catch him.

 

EXT.  ANOTHER PLACE ON THE BEACH - NIGHT

 

INSERT - GUYS CARRYING GIRL RUNNING

All four guys are still running when Shawn catches up to them.

 

They come to a place where its full of trees and tall rocks all around.

 

EXT.  BACK ON BEACH

 

                        SHAWN

                (Still carrying the gun)

           Ok guys, quick, dig a hole.

 

Dave looks at John.

 

                       DAVE

                (scared)

           You think we should carry her

           a little farther?

 

                       JOHN

           This is far enough.

 

                       SHAWN

           Okay, lets get to it. Dig fast.

 

They drop the girl in the sand, get down on their knees, start digging a hole as fast as they can with their hands. After a couple of feet, John stops, stands up.

 

                       JOHN

           Throw her in.

 

                       DAVE

           What about the gun?

 

John looks at Shawn.

 

                       JOHN

           Throw it in with the body.

 

Shawn throws the gun into the hole.

                                                              

                 The girls body is thrown into the hole by Dave and Bill. They start covering her up with sand.

 

Bill starts wiping down the area with a big tree branch to cover up the footprints.

 

                       BILL

                (stern)

           All right, everybody grab

           some branches. We’ll back

           track to where we came from

           to cover our tracks.

 

They start brushing the sand, walking backwards.

 

They brush the sand back toward the area where this happened.

 

                      PAUL

                (shaking)

           Oh my god, were really in

         trouble now.

 

                       BILL

                (aggravated)

           Will you shut the fuck up.

                                                              

                       DAVE

           We’d better think up a story

           of where we were tonight.

 

                       JOHN

And make sure we stick to it.

 

Paul walks up to each guy, taking the branches from their hands.

 

                       PAUL

           What about the guy that

           saw us?

 

The guys walk towards the campfire. Paul throws the branches into the rocks.

 

     EXT.  AT CAMPFIRE   

 

                       BILL

     Don’t worry, its his word

         against ours, plus they

         have to have a body to prove

         anything.

 

                       PAUL

           But what if they find the body?

 

                       SHAWN

           When everything cools down,

         we’ll move her far away where

         nobody will ever find her.

                                                              

                       DAVE

           That’s a good idea. Let’s

         get out of here before the

         police show up.

 

                                       SHAWN

           Yeah, We’ll meet at my place

           tomorrow.

 

                       JOHN

           Okay, everybody, put sand on

           the fire.

 

They all bend down, throw sand on the fire.

 

They run to the large rocks, start climbing over the rock wall.

 

EXT.  BEACH

 

They start running down the beach, each going his own way.

 

INT.  TONY’S LIVING ROOM

 

Tony and Gene run in the door, sit on the livingroom couch.

 

                     TONY

              (breathing heavy)

          Holy shit, what do we do?

 

                     GENE

              (breathing heavy)

          What do you mean? We go tell

         the police.

 

                     TONY

              (scared)

     You crazy! Do you know who

          the guy is that shot the girl?

 

                     GENE

          No...

 

                     TONY

          That was the sheriffs son.

 

                     GENE

              (surprised)

          You’re kidding.

 

                     TONY

                        No....

                                                        

                     GENE

          Do you know anything about

         the sheriff?

 

Tony starts pacing.

 

                     TONY

              (still scared)

          No, but don’t mention that

          you know it was his son that

          shot the girl.

 

                     GENE

          Why not?

                                                         

                     TONY

          Let’s see what he does after

          he finds out.

 

                     GENE

                                      Sounds good.

 

                     TONY

And keep my name out of this.

          I live in this town and this

          could bring my family trouble.

             

                     GENE

     All right. I’m going to the

          sheriff’s office now.

 

Gene stands up, walks to the door.

 

                     TONY

              (scared)

          Be careful. I don’t think he

          want’s to arrest his own son.

 

Gene places his hand on the doorknob.

 

                     GENE

          I know what you mean. I’ll

          see you later, let you know

          what the says.

 

He walks out the door, closes it. A few seconds later,  he walks back in, smiling.

 

                     GENE

          How the hell do I get there?

                                                        

Tony laughs.

 

EXT.  GENE DRIVING TO TOWN

 

He spots the sheriff’s office, parks. A large sign overhangs above the doors. ‘Haley’s police headquarters’.

 

EXT.  LONG SHOT - POLICE STATION - NIGHT

 

He gets out of the car, stands, looks around at the empty street, closes the door to his car. He watches a police car pull into the parking lot.

 

Watches two policemen directing a guy in hand cuffs into the stations side door. He slowly walks into the front office.

 

INT.  POLICE STATION - OUTER OFFICE - NIGHT

                                                        

 

Stops at the reception desk, only two desks occupied with policemen. The office is fairly large. White walls, ten desks, five on each side of the room.

 

A long counter in front of the office, from wall to wall with a gate leading inside the main office at the far left.

 

Four doors lead to other rooms. Two in the back, one on each side of the office.

 

The sheriff’s office is on the right side of the room, next  to the receptionist desk, with pictures of presidents plus a poster of Uncle Sam to the left of the s door.

 

                     GENE

              (to CATHY/receptionist)

          Who’s in charge at this hour?

 

                     CATHY

          The sheriff, he’s still here, why?

 

                     GENE

Could you please tell him I’d

          like to talk to him.

 

Cathy stands up from behind the counter. Tiny little woman, short black hair, slim.                                                          

                CATHY

          What do you want to see him about?

 

                     GENE

          I’d like to tell him in private,

          its important.

                                                              Cathy walks to the s door, knocks twice.   

 

 

                     SHERIFF (OS)

          Come in.

Cathy walks in. Sheriff looking up from his desk.

 

                     SHERIFF

          Yeah, what do you want?

 

                     CATHY

          A guy out here, looks a little

          shaken, wants to talk to you

 

Paper in hand, papers clutter the desk, looks up, angry.

Sits back in his chair.

 

                     SHERIFF

          What does he want?

 

                     CATHY

          He won’t say.

 

Flipping papers on his desk.

                  

                     SHERIFF

              (nasty)

          Send him in. 

 

Cathy walks out of the sheriff’s office, walks to the gate, opens it.

 

                     CATHY

                   (to Gene)

          This way please.

 

INT.  SHERIFF’S OFFICE

 

Cathy walks to the s door, Gene walks a little behind.

 

She opens the door, stands aside, Gene walks in.

 

Cathy closes the door, Gene walks up to the sheriff’s desk, stands there waiting for the sheriff to look at him.

 

The sheriff is a rotund man, in his fifties, grey hair, has a deep voice. An unpleasant man.

                                                                               SHERIFF  

              (looking up)

          What can I do for you.

                                                        

 

                     GENE

          Welllllll, I just saw a girl

          get shot in the back.

Standing up from behind his desk.

 

                     SHERIFF

              (excited/loud)

          You what!

 

                     GENE

          That’s right.

 

                     SHERIFF

          Where did this happen?

 

 

                     GENE

              (nervous)

          On the beach. They started

          shooting at me so I ran.

 

                     SHERIFF

          How do you know the girl

          is dead?

 

                     GENE

Lots of blood was splattering

          all over the place when she

          fell down.

 

Hands clinched on desk leaning forward.

                                 

                     SHERIFF

                                           But you’re not sure, are

          you?

 

Gene takes a step back.

 

                     GENE

          Uh, no.

 

                     SHERIFF

          Did you see their faces?

 

Gene starts pacing the floor.

                                                                                GENE

It was a little dark but I

          know I could recognize two

          of them, maybe three. The

          moonlight and the flames of

          the fire gave me plenty of

          light.

              (beat)

          The one who did the shooting

          was called Shawn. About my size.

 

                     SHERIFF

              (startled look)

          Did you say SHAWN?

 

The sheriff sits down, jots down the name and size.

 

                     GENE

          Yes.

 

 

                     SHERIFF

          Did you hear any other names?

 

                     GENE

          Uh huh. One was called John,

          another called Bill.

 

Really concerned look on is face. He recognizes all the names. Jots them down.

 

He stands up, walks towards the door, picks up his hat from a table beside the door, walking out the door, turns to Gene, gestures for him to follow.

 

                     SHERIFF

          Okay. Show me where this

          happened.

 

EXT.  SHERIFF’S POLICE CAR

 

They walk out of the office, get into the police car. Gene looks at the sheriff.

 

INT.  SHERIFF’S POLICE CAR

 

                     GENE

              Drive by the big pier, then

          turn right, about a mile.

 

EXT.  DRIVING ON THE BEACH

 

They bounce along the beach, through the sand.

                                                                               GENE

              (pointing)

          Over there by those rocks.

 

They arrive near the rocks, get out of the car, start walking toward the rocks.

 

EXT.  SECLUDED PART OF THE BEACH

 

                     GENE

              (motioning)

          Follow me.

 

They walk along the rocks, Gene pointing to the top of the rocks.

 

                     GENE

          Over here. 

 

They walk to where Gene points, climb up the rocks, then climb down the other side, walk to where the girl fell.  

 

                     GENE

              (points)

          This is where the girl fell.

 

Looking at Gene.

 

                     SHERIFF

          You’re sure?

 

                     GENE

          I’m positive.

 

The sheriff probes the area with his flashlight and night stick, but couldn’t see anything.

 

                     SHERIFF

     I can’t find anything. I

          don’t even see footprints.

 

Looking around, left and right.

 

                     GENE